Wednesday, 2 September 2015

STORY # 6
Title of my Story:
Genre: 
Logline: Bomi, An introverted girl gets bullied a pair of girls, but tries to be optimistic because of her friend Suzy but problems occur after she doubts Suzy’s friendship.

My Story:
It was dark, i feel heavy and my head is throbbing like crazy. I can hear the sound of the bell, i think class just ended but I’m to lazy to get up. I’m pretty sure they will just make fun of me. But I need to take my things in the classrooms so i sit up straight and slowly open my eyes. I can hear someone giggling and murmuring. It was a familiar voice. I slowly turn around and saw the two girls who made my life a living hell. I started to have a hard time breathing whenever the bullies are near me. They always make fun of me by staring at me and giggling. Though I have no idea why they do that me. I didn’t do anything bad towards them.“Arrgh…Ignore them, they just want to feel good about themselves...Just suck it up”, I told myself. The sound of their laughter slowly disappear.It was amazing everything was in slow motion as if I was in a movie. Though i feel better, i can still feel something heavy in my heart and mind. Then all of a sudden I remembered that we were supposed to meet her in the library

I looked everywhere for my friend Suzy, she is my childhood friend and my only friend. One of the reason I go to school though I am being bullied by others. She encourages me all the time though she is also weak-kneed like me though she is cranky at times. I’m still unclear why she would befriend me. I’m weak, shy, weird, and people hate me . Though we don’t hang out anymore like we used to in the past.

I’m not sure if Suzy is ashamed of me or scared that the bullies will bully her as well because we are friends because she only hangs out with me only in the library or outside school. But It’s alright. This place is special to us as we met here for the first time. Suzy told me that I was snoring so loudly while I sleep and she thought it was cute and funny but I was so embarrased. That’s how we became friends.
But now that the bullies saw me hanging out here. I’m scared that Suzy will stop hanging out with me even in this place. Flashbacks of our happy moments kept on replaying in my mind.

I couldn’t find Suzy. It was weird. Then my phone rang, it’s Suzy. “I’m here look behind you.” I turned around and I saw Suzy hiding. “Why are you hiding?” I asked suzy. “The bullies are here. I saw them just now. That’s why I’m leaving…. I’m sorry Bomi but I need to go.I’m scared of them. Bye. As I looked at her everything began to move in slow motion.” I was appalled. I feel like my only friend abandoned me. So i stood up slowly and my vision started to blur. My head ache is back again but this time it’s too painful. My head is throbbing and I couldn’t breathe. I wanted to call Suzy but I couldn’t. I can hear a shrieking sound,slowly fading. I couldn’t breathe properly. I want to call for help but I’m too weak to do it and everything went black..
Hours passed.


Next day, Suzy calls Bomi wanting to meet up in the library. “Bomi bomi bomi ” says Suzy. There were faint sound from the phone.She looks at her phone and drops it with a shocked face and ran after reading the message of Bomi’s mom saying.” Bomi left us last night due to hemmorhage.” 

Wednesday, 29 July 2015

normal

LOGLINE:

It’s about a guy who is known as a gangster, who falls in love with a girl who hates him. He was dared by his friends to make someone fall in love with him to make him. He needs to make a girl fall in love with him despite his status so he won't be called a coward anymore.

Story:
A group of guys who are known as gangsters walk through the hall with messy hairstyles, unbuttoned shirts and acts as if they own the school.  In the middle is their boss, Kyle, who is known for fighting all the gangster bosses in town, impressing a lot of people, and earning his own bunch of hooligans.

After assembly, Kyle and his gang members see a girl stumble in front of them. She is Mia, a normal girl with a simple life and with ordinary features. Mike glances at Kyle and sees his gleaming eyes staring at Mia and comes up with a dare that will strip Kyle of the people's admiration. Mia picks up her school books and brushes the dust off her skirt. Mike dares Kyle to seduce Mia but Kyles declines saying that it would be disrespectful to her. " Don't be a coward. You are the strongest guy around and you don't even have the courage to seduce a wimpy girl?" says Mike. "Do it Kyle!" "Prove him wrong Kyle!" "Be Nike Kyle! Just Do it!" Shouts the other gang members. To prove Mike wrong, Kyle accepts the dare.

During Lunch, Kyle looks for Mia with a bottle of orange juice in hand and a sandwich on the other. He finds her behind the school building and tries to give her the snacks he bought. As he stretches out his arms, offering her the drink, Kyle's hands start to tremble as he touches a bit of Mia's hand and spills some of the juice on her hand. He becomes more nervous and spills the entire juice as he tries to wipe the juice on the floor. Feeling embarrassed, he apologizes and leaves. Mia on the other hand didn't look happy at all and finds him a bit weird. 

Kyle goes to the toilet to cool down. He washes his face to hide the sweat and cools down his face to hide the fact from his friends that he is nervous in front of Mia. He was feeling strange because he never felt this way before. His heart beats like crazy, his face red, his hands shaking, and sweats profusely. He goes back to the cafeteria and acts as if he succeeded in giving Mia, the sandwich and orange juice.

After school, Kyle follows Mia. Kyle contemplates whether to go talk to her or to continue to stay at the back and follow her as he doesn't know what to do. Remembering the dare, he goes to her side and says Hi. There was a long pause after their greetings. A group of grown-ups appear in front of them and demands Mia to tell them where her brother is but Mia refuses to answer them. They pushes Mia and infuriates Kyle. Kyle punches the guy and it became a 1 vs 10 fight. Amazingly, Kyle won. Mia, was touched and thanks him for what he did. Because of that incident the two became close. The two spends their time almost 24/7. They go to school together, eat, study and go home together. 

Because of Kyle's innocence he thinks that they are dating and so he decided to prepare an event for Mia celebrating their monthsary. It was a romantic candlelit dinner. Flowers and candles all over the floor, balloons on the ceiling and foods Mia likes.
She brings Mia to the restaurant, blind folded. She slowly opens her eyes and was shocked. Kyle seemed lost because Mia did not look happy. "What is all this? Are you dating someone?" says Mia.
"I'm dating you. Today is  our monthsary." says Kyle. Mia smiles and tells him that she only sees him as a friend not as a lover. She will never date anyone who is a gangster and hits people just to prove they are strong. " I know i hit people and i am not happy with what i am doing. All my friends are gangster and i thought that if i follow  and copy them, i will feel that i belong to them. If you want i will quit being a gangster" says kyle. Mia apologizes to him and tells him that he doesn't need to quit or change just to fit in. Being different is all right. He will always be her friend and will be there for him. Kyle feels a bit better and thanks Mia for the advice and that he will wait for her until she accepts him for what he is.